JumpStart
Main Line

An essay writing camp for rising high school seniors.

Write a stunning essay

JumpStart Main Line provides students with the support and resources to help them write an outstanding essay. We help students with idea generation and theme development.


Write your own essay

We won't write your essay for you, but we will help you make it sharp! We will help unleash your potential.

Engagement

We help make the college essay writing process a stress-free and enjoyable learning experience. Each Zoom classroom has a 4:1 student-teacher ratio.

Draft and polish

We believe in process writing. Our model involves multiple one-on-one conferences for each student.

Review

Our conferences go beyond copy-editing. Our feedback will push you to do the best work you can do.

Your Teachers

We are passionate teachers with years of experience.


Paul Wright

2011 Pennsylvania Teacher-of-the-Yr Finalist

28 years MS/HS Social Studies/Interdisciplinary

14 years writing/college-essay tutoring

Carl Rosin

2014 National Philosophy Teacher of the Year

24 years HS English/Interdisciplinary teacher

16 years writing/college-essay tutoring including 6+ years in RHS Writing Center

TJ Neary

22 years HS English/Interdisciplinary teacher (Radnor HS)

MA in Literature, 8 years teaching writing on the college level

10 years tutoring college-essay writers in RHS Writing Center



Adam Udell

24 years HS Social Studies teacher of Government and Philosophy (Octorara HS)

Adjunct professor

6 years as content specialist for National Board for Professional Teaching Standards

 

Kaitlyn McCool

10 years HS English teacher (Haverford HS)

5 years working with college-essay writers

2 years teaching SAT prep



FAQ


Some questions that students and parents ask frequently.

How will coronavirus (COVID-19) restrictions affect JumpStart sessions?

We are building on our experience with Zoom from last summer. We Zoomed with almost 100 students in 2020 and are confident that this will continue to work well for this summer's students. The success of your essay remains our promise and our priority.

What work will be accomplished at JumpStart Main Line?

Students come to Zoom class on Day 1 with nothing. We take you through introductions to this type of writing, some examples, and idea-generation exercises, and then you write and conference, conference and write.

During in-person classes (2013-2019), over 75% of our students left after four days with their Common App essay completed. The remaining 25% were able to email with us until the end of July with questions and revisions. For the summer of 2020 on Zoom, the four-day completion rate rose to almost 85%. Conferences occur one-on-one in Zoom breakout rooms, mainly over shared on-line documents.

We still expect that a student who focuses on their essay can have a complete, edited document ready by the end of the four-day session. If it takes a little longer, we will of course continue to work with you until the end of July, if necessary, to make sure the essay is done to your satisfaction.

What if I am applying to a non-Common App college?

JumpStart’s teachers will work with you on a college essay of your choice –- the Common App is simply the most...well, common. Well-named, as it turns out! Schools that do not use the Common App often require a personal statement or offer another prompt that is very similar to one of the Common App prompts. We have had students complete non-Common App essays every year, including those for the (relatively new) Coalition for Access, Affordability, and Success.

What are the hours for the course?

Morning sessions start at 9:00 a.m.; evening sessions start at 4:30 p.m. Expect approximately 90 minutes on instruction and topic-generation exercises on Day 1, followed by individual conferences with each student; expect approximately 60 minutes on instruction and strategy on Day 2, followed by individual conferences with each student; after that, one-on-one conferences will keep happening until the essay is done. This is an iterative process, so we expect several loops of writing, feedback, editing/writing, feedback, editing/writing, etc. At 2.5 hours per day for four days, the session lasts a total of 10 hours.

What are the dates for the course?

    SUMMER 2021: Scheduled sessions will be held in late June, early July, and early August. Students from all schools are welcome to attend!


  • June 21 (Monday) - 24 (Thursday), evening (session 1): 4:30-7:00 p.m. for Zoom and conferencing ... FULL as of 4/22/21
  • June 28 (Monday) - July 1 (Thursday), morning (session 2): 9:00-11:30 a.m. for Zoom and conferencing ... FULL as of 6/15/21
  • June 28 (Monday) - July 1 (Thursday), evening (session 3): 4:30-7:00 p.m. for Zoom and conferencing
  • July 6 (Tuesday) - July 9 (Friday), morning (session 4): 9:00-11:30 a.m. for Zoom and conferencing ... FULL as of 6/30/21
  • July 6 (Tuesday) - July 9 (Friday), evening (session 5): 4:30-7:00 p.m. for Zoom and conferencing
  • August 2 (Monday) - 5 (Thursday), morning (session 6): 9:00-11:30 a.m. for Zoom and conferencing ... FULL as of 7/9/21

Our sessions are fully subscribed for the summer, but we'd still love to talk about options for working with you. Contact us for further information. The price for one-on-one tutoring is $650, to cover as many meetings as necessary for you to get to a complete Common App essay that satisfies you.

How large are the classes?

The student-teacher ratio is no greater than 4:1. At least two teachers (and maybe all five of us) will be present in any session, to make sure that each student receives feedback from multiple readers.

Does the course have one-on-one or group instruction?

Both! We open with group instruction for introduction, context, and idea-generation exercises, but even on Day 1 we meet one-on-one with each student. Day 2: some group instruction plus more one-on-one meetings. After that, it is all one-on-one until the essay is done.

How much does the course cost?

The camp costs $575 for the session, including all instruction, conferencing, and editing.

Where does JumpStart Main Line meet?

Online, in the video-conferencing app Zoom. You don't have to download any software, but we'll reach out to you to check technical specifications. We'll email you an invitation link shortly before your session begins.

During one-to-one Zoom conferences we often also "meet" in shared documents -- whatever makes the most sense for that student at that point in that essay!

Who can take JumpStart Main Line's essay camp?

All rising seniors are welcome! We have taught students from Radnor HS, Haverford HS, Great Valley HS, Lower Merion HS, Harriton HS, Conestoga HS, Methacton HS, St. Joes’s Prep, the Baldwin School, Agnes Irwin School, Merion Mercy Academy, Malvern Prep, the Haverford School, the Shipley School, West Chester-Henderson, West Chester-Rustin HS, Downingtown West, Downingtown STEM, and several others. We even had students Zooming in from Mexico and Germany and Washington State!

Bottom line: if you can get to us, we will work with you!

What schools have our clients been accepted to?

(Graphic: thanks to wordclouds.com)

Pricing


Only one-on-one openings are still available for Summer 2021; one-on-one tutoring costs a total of $650, with a $300 non-refundable deposit towards that tuition.

Forms


Ready to sign up for JumpStart? We're excited to hear from you! Please return the registration form to secure a seat in the camp.
We also have a Facebook page, "JumpStart Main Line," that you can check for updates. Please "like" us there!

2021 Registration Form

Online Payment

PayPal is available for you to submit the full one-on-one fee of $650 only (not installments).

Payment
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Note: $300 is non-refundable.